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| 11 Oct 2014 10:05 AM
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And I'd like to post some of it for you guys to see what you think about it, and maybe give me some ideas.
So here's the story so far. The main character, Josh, has just discovered that he can travel to other worlds using his imagination. And when he does, he finds himself in an odd world where everything is black and white, and there are people dressed as monsters chasing him. He sees a bunch of black and white cars racing eachother, and soon, one of them crashes into one of the monster people, killing the monster. As the car drives away, it drives over the monster person and flattens him.
The next thing he sees is a monster person with the same clothes as before, but this time, he's wearing sunglasses and driving another black and white car. Soon, Josh sees a girl who seems to be scared of the monster person. She asks him if he's alright, and he says he is, but she doesn't look convinced.
Josh sees a man running towards him. He looks at the man, and sees that he has a gun. The monster person also has a gun, and he pulls it out and points it at the man. The monster person shoots the man in the shoulder, and the man drops to the ground, holding his bloody arm. The monster person gets back into his car and drives away, while the man calls for help from someone else.
Soon, another monster person comes up behind Josh and grabs his arm and drags him down the street. He fights the monster, and manages to break free and runs away. He hides behind a trash can and tries to calm down.
So what do you guys think about the story so far? And any ideas on how I should continue?
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| 11 Oct 2014 10:08 AM
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I would like to see more though...
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| 11 Oct 2014 10:12 AM
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I'll be sure to post more later today or tomorrow. I'll try to keep it updated every few days or so.
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