 2I6
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| 22 Aug 2011 05:37 AM
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i'm writing a story about a guy that comes in a room and there is a red box on the table and it's his mission to get inside of the box. he finds an apple and puts it inside the box. he opens the box and then he is eaten by a tiger. the end
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| 22 Aug 2011 05:40 AM
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I'm sorry but your story isn't very good. Try using more descriptive words, and maybe change up the ending.
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