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| 19 Oct 2013 10:59 AM
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I was thinking of a story where a girl gets bullied in school, but when she gets home she is fine. She has a secret that makes her strong enough to ignore the bullies.
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| 19 Oct 2013 11:01 AM
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Thank you for the corrections.
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| 19 Oct 2013 11:06 AM
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I think it should be
The girl get's bullied but when she gets home, she is just as fine as normal.
She has a secret that make's her strong enough to ignore them.
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| 19 Oct 2013 11:09 AM
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@dark
You didn't correct anything.
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