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| 05 Aug 2010 10:45 PM
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So, I'm the OC named Shimmer. And my little sister is called Dusk. We are the only ponies in town (We live in a desert) So we're the only ponies for miles.
We met an Equestrian pony who told us about Friendship Magic. We didn't know about Friendship magic. Then when we were older, we found out what Friendship magic was. We used our special powers to turn a bunch of cows into ponies. I just became a unicorn because I turned a cow with a horn on it's head. Dusk became a pegasus because she turned a cow with wings on it.
Then we met a new character, he was named Sparkle. He was also a pony. But he had no special powers. He was a stallion. One day, his horn fell off. When it fell off, I asked him if he wanted to go to Ponyville or something. He said yes. So then we went to Equestria, which is a place that has ponies. Everypony lives there. Then we made friends with Rainbow Dash. She helped us find our home, and stuff like that.
So, do you think that story is good? Should I keep going? Do you have any suggestions on making it better?
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| 05 Aug 2010 10:46 PM
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And I'm sorry for the terrible grammar.
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